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"You're more than halfway there" Need more feedback on the model.

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Ok, I have done some of the things that have been suggested.

- Made the cheeks better. Right?

- Moved the eyes in towards the center more

- Made the nose bigger and tried to make it rounder

- Fixed elbows, and deforming works good until around 90 degrees, like you said Cirevam. Thanks!

- Will make arms thicker, as eagle suggested, not feeling too good right now.

- Made chest better

Alright, I want more CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.

And thanks for all of your support!

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Eagle98

Hm...constructive criticism...

- The top of the person's chest is rather large compared to the rest of the body.

- The neck seems too thick.

- The person looks like it is leaning its head forward.

- Chest too narrow, or head too big?

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Addictgamer

- I see...

- Semi fixed that in the next version.

- Head is too long if you look at side view.

- Same as above

Thank you.

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TheDoctor

The head needs to be rounder, not longer,

The arms need to be fatter, and properly bent,

The neck and upper torso are kinda...deformed, smooth it out a bit

You're gettin' there...

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Addictgamer

1. I know it's too long, and I'll round it out since you pointed it out...

2. I know...Will work on that

3. I did find it very ugly...

4. Thanks...

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