Real criticism? Or... "selective criticism"? :P

Huh?

Just use critisism you'd use for judging a dwarf model.

I already started on the scene, and I have made a short 8 second clip of the camera gliding through the scene.

I just need to compress better, it's 42 mb right now.

Please tell me that its suppose to be a girl.

The neck and head are your real problem. THe neck needs to be squatter, the head needs to be rounded, and do a bit of detail work on the lower half if it. Oh, and make hands too.

All need to be done.

More criticism?