Sorry, I got caught up on other stuff, but Chapter 2 will be distributed soon (probably tomorrow night)

:: Questions for Readers::

1. Should I continue making chapters short like Chapter 1, or would you prefer longer, more detailed chapters?

2. What is your rating of the story so far?

5- Great, very descriptive

4- Good, could provide more detail

3- Average, needs some improvement

2- Not Good, needs much improvement

1- Bad, needs to re-learn writing skills

(Please provide other reasons for the rating you chose)

3. Any comments or concerns or advice?

Please answer these questions truthfully. If it sucks, let me know. If you like it, good.