McJobless Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 Present "Gamma Station, this is Rosebud. Clear for Extraction, Over?" "Negative. We are facing electrical surges from all over the grid and we can't risk any extra interference." "But we are gonna die! There is..." "We said Negative Rosebud. You'll have to hold on. That's orders." 1 Year Ago I woke up. Damn those cursed Horse Tranquillisers! I'd already had enough trouble getting to sleep, so why make me feel even worse? Oh well. I picked up my shirt from the nearby 'table'. It was mostly splinters now that the whole cadet squad had been trained in using blasters, and had been using whatever they could find as practice targets. As quietly as I had stood up, I sneaked over to the window which had sort of lost it's sturdiness and position on the adjacent wall. Several Bullet holes had embedded themselves deep within the "Bullet and Laserproof" glass. I gazzed out into the foggy miss that was the night sky. I thought about my place, my history, and Earth in general. 1st Pvt. James Benjamin Miller was born on 13/07/2119. His parents, named Mark Damian Miller and Kat |HIDDEN| Sheperd were both employed under a very early Rock Raider Unit called the Triage. Triage was both powerfull, and the most elite unit of Special Underground Tactical Movement and Digging Procedures (Or UTMDP, Also Called UDP). Triage was disbanded after the 2nd Eagles Squad attempted, AGAINST ORDERS, to destroy a proto-type -More Soon- Signed Extreme110 Also, the actually look must of F-ed up when I posted it. I will fix this... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymouse Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 I've edited a bit to make it use BBCode formatting instead, as it really stretched the page on my netbook screen. Hope you don't mind, sorry if you do Anyway, nice story so far Although, what does it have to do with RR? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McJobless Posted April 12, 2010 Author Share Posted April 12, 2010 I've edited a bit to make it use BBCode formatting instead, as it really stretched the page on my netbook screen. Hope you don't mind, sorry if you do Although, what does it have to do with RR? I don't mind for now. I'll figure out why the page stretched like that and fix it eventually. As for how it has anything to do with RR? I'm about 3 lines away from tieing it in. The main character and everone else is a Rock Raider. But thats all I will give away on the story-line... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymouse Posted April 12, 2010 Share Posted April 12, 2010 About the stretching, it was because of the small screen and large number of underscores. Please don't use that formatting _anywhere_, because it's very unwelcome in most places (just a hint, not intended to sound nasty ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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