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Teh seventy-billion trombone playing rockraider lego people finished repulsing away from each other at the bestest drilling ever!

 

Teh Tawny-Frogmouth trombone playing raider lego people finished repulsing away from each other at the bestest drilling ever!

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It took me about 10 minutes to work out what the grammar was doing in that sentence... And I mean 10 minutes...

 

Teh Tawny-Frogmouth trombone-playing raideraic Lego people finished repulsing away from each other at the best drilling statue.

                                                    /                         /                                                                                                                           /                     /

                                     It's a participle      You need an adjective here                                                            There is no 'bestest'          And this is the word I wanted to change

 

(I know that was technically four words changed, but I couldn't bear the hideous grammar)

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