Leumeister Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 (edited) Chapter 1 Prologue June 18 2993 0705hrs As Dave gets up he has a funny feeling about this Day as He forgot his own Birthday(1) after a Quick PRM(2) He went DownStairs and... "HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAVE" Every one said. Dave was so suprised he stumbled backwords and fell over "Heh heh Yeah I knew that there was somthing funny about Today" he said Axle Jet Jace and the rest(3) were there. June 18 2993 1330hrsRRU Docking site "okay Ready... OPEN YOUR EYES" said Axle "WOAH AN RRUS CLASS SHIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" said Dave Exitedly "do you like it" Axle said Dryly "duh yeah i do Whats its name?" "well its Called the R.R.U.S. DS" replied Axle "what does DS stand for?" asks Dave "DAVE SKYWALKER" Axle told Dave "nice it has a good 'Ring' to it" said Dave jokingly he knew that it was his own name (end of Prologue) (1) PRM Stands for Plauqe Removal Machine (2) Dave is now 13 years old (3) go here june 19 2:22 AM "ugh i cant sleep. either its the bed or somethings bothering me" said a DROWSY Dave he got up and went to the mess hall he was hungry wen he got there he saw Zeke Meaho drinking some Dr Pepper "Um hi there Zeke you havin' trouble sleeping too?" "Yeah *gulp* i was just thinkin' about how Nasty i was to Rock Raider team 51" he said "ah yeah i know all about that you had 5 or 6 attemps at getting the Power Crystals all for yourself for no apparent reason. wanna sandwich? its egg salad!" "thank you Dave I'll have one. well accully there was a reason a family fewd against Chief's family" Zeke said sentimentaly "Oh? Really and Chief didn't know about that?" "no not untill my third attempt but he died along with The UMS Explorer before i could ask for forgiveness" Zeke said another sentimental frown appeered on his face june 23 7:30 AM Dave woke up and strated his usual routine however in the middle of his shower a strange gravitational anomaly occured "No no no no NO NOT AGAIN NOT AGAIN" Dave heard Xavier, one of the ships pilots, Screaming from the control room Bandit and Jet were also there and they looked like they've seen a ghost "whats goin' on Xavier?" he asked "Its that Time of Month thats What!" Dave looked confused then a Green Alien in a Blue and White Jumpsuit appered he was Lieutenant Akcor, or Kcor by his friends, he is a Visser(1-a) "oh snap its the quadrant 54.009 Monthly Wormhole" he said The Wormhole Pulled The R.R.U.S. DS into it and, unlike last time where it took 15 agonizing minutes, a split second later they were back in the all too familier Galaxy. to name just a few of the planets; there was Amurosse(2), Visstrosse(1-b), Planet U and Kankeves(3) everybody was scared frustraited sad and happy all at the same time except for Dave who still had that Cool/Quizzicle look on his face "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" Screamed Axle "Back here again" said a stressed/scared Cadet "EVERYBODY CHILL OUT" Shouted Docs in a commanding Tone Everybody screamed to a halt and the Bridge went silent untill Docs Broke it Saying "all right Sparks How much Power Do We have left?" He said "20.3 Percent in the main reactor and uhh... 13.9 Percent in the auxillery batterys that adds up to 34.2 percent" he said silence fell over the bridge again then Docs piped up "Jet how many Parsecs does it take to get to here" "12 Parsecs" Jet Replied Then Docs put an ominous look on his face and said "Just enough to get us to Planet U" Then as if she read his thoughts Jet Ran up to the Control Tower. Then the ship jolted forward at 5566 SMPH! yes Jet had put the ships engines into Full Throttle and a few minutes later we had Visual Contact with Planet U and in its Gravitational Pull then Jet Realesed the throttles and... the ship kept going? somthing was wrong The Throttles on an RRUS Class ship had snap-back releases but these were Broken... To Be Continued (1-a) and (1-b) Visstrosse is the Visstrossian (or Visser) home world and Akcor is from said planet. (2) Amurosse is the planet for the ZMC or Zotaxian mining colony they mine Energy hex's there. (3) Kankeves (Pronounced Can-Cevs) is an artificial planet that used to be in the Coreillian sector it was moved by the intergalactic warlords the Rotokhs (Pronounced Roh-Tocks) Edited December 25, 2011 by Rock Raider fan no.1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zephyria Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 Jace Beleren? MtG Fan? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lair Posted April 26, 2010 Share Posted April 26, 2010 Ahem. I own the "Return to Planet U" name. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leumeister Posted April 27, 2010 Author Share Posted April 27, 2010 Ahem. I own the "Return to Planet U" name. well i thought The Planet U Return sounded well..dumb so thats why with your permission to use Return to Planet U Jace Beleren? MtG Fan? ??? no Jet is Axles wife and Jace is the formers/Jets sister and other than Axle Karary Jace is the only famaly she has Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lair Posted April 29, 2010 Share Posted April 29, 2010 well i thought The Planet U Return sounded well..dumb so thats why with your permission to use Return to Planet U When did you get this permission? Understand that the story I am *slowly* creating has the same name. Seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymouse Posted April 29, 2010 Share Posted April 29, 2010 well i thought The Planet U Return sounded well..dumb so thats why with your permission to use Return to Planet U When did you get this permission? When did you register "Return to Planet U" as a trademark of yours? Seriously, you have no legal right to stop him from using it. You can ask him to use a different name, but whether he does so is his decision. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leumeister Posted May 16, 2010 Author Share Posted May 16, 2010 well i thought The Planet U Return sounded well..dumb so thats why with your permission to use Return to Planet U When did you get this permission? When did you register "Return to Planet U" as a trademark of yours? Seriously, you have no legal right to stop him from using it. You can ask him to use a different name, but whether he does so is his decision. I just asked him My permission in that last Post guys any way i just updated the year its now insted of the 26th century its in the 30th century Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lair Posted May 17, 2010 Share Posted May 17, 2010 well i thought The Planet U Return sounded well..dumb so thats why with your permission to use Return to Planet U When did you get this permission? When did you register "Return to Planet U" as a trademark of yours? Seriously, you have no legal right to stop him from using it. You can ask him to use a different name, but whether he does so is his decision. I just asked him My permission in that last Post guys When did I give it? Kepp the name, it's just the name. Understand though that ththing I have planned is called about the same thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leumeister Posted July 27, 2010 Author Share Posted July 27, 2010 Chapter 1 Prologue June 18 2993 0705hrs As Dave gets up he has a funny feeling about this Day as He forgot his own Birthday(1) after a Quick PRM(2) He went DownStairs and... "HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAVE" Every one said. Dave was so suprised he stumbled backwords and fell over "Heh heh Yeah I knew that there was somthing funny about Today" he said Axle Jet Jace and the rest(3) were there. June 18 2993 1330hrsRRU Docking site "okay Ready...OPEN YOUR EYES" said Axle "WOAH AN RRUS CLASS SHIP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Whats its name?" said Dave Exitedly "well its Called the R.R.U.S. DS" replied Axle "what does DS stand for?" asks Dave "DAVE SKYWALKER" Axle told Dave "nice it has a good 'Ring' to it" said Dave jokingly he knew that it was his own name (end of Prologue) (1) PRM Stands for Plauqe Removal Machine (2) Dave is now 13 years old (3) go here june 19 2:22 AM "ugh i cant sleep. either its the bed or somethings bothering me" said a DROWSY Dave he got up and went to the mess hall he was hungry wen he got there he saw Zeke Meaho drinking some Dr Pepper "Um hi there Zeke you havin' trouble sleeping too?" "Yeah *gulp* i was just thinkin' about how Nasty i was to Rock Raider team 51" he said "ah yeah i know all about that you had 5 or 6 attemps at getting the Power Crystals all for yourself for no apparent reason. wanna sandwich? its egg salad!" "thank you Dave I'll have one. well accully there was a reason a family fewd against Chief's family" Zeke said sentimentaly "Oh? Really and Chief didn't know about that?" "no not untill my third attempt but he died along with The UMS Explorer before i could ask for forgiveness" Zeke said another sentimental frown appeered on his face june 23 7:30 AM Dave woke up and strated his usual routine however in the middle of his shower a strange gravitational anomaly occured "No no no no NO NOT AGAIN NOT AGAIN" Dave heard Xavier, one of the ships piolets, Screaming from the control room Bandit and Jet were also there and they looked like they've seen a ghost "whats goin' on Xavier?" he asked "Its that Time of Month thats What!" Dave looked confused then a Green Alien in a Blue and White Jumpsuit appered he was Lieutenant Akcor, or Kcor by his friends, he is a Visser(1-a) "oh snap its the quadrant 54.009 Monthly Wormhole" he said The Wormhole Pulled The R.R.U.S. DS into it and, unlike last time where it took 15 agonizing minutes, a split second later they were back in the all too familier Galaxy. to name just a few of the planets; there was Amurosse(2), Visortria(1-b), Planet U and Kankeves(3) everybody was scared frustraited sad and happy all at the same time except for Dave who still had that Cool/Quizzicle look on his face "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" Screamed Axle "Back here again" said a stressed/scared Cadet "EVERYBODY CHILL OUT" Shouted Docs in a commanding Tone Everybody screamed to a halt and the Bridge went silent untill Docs Broke it Saying "all right Sparks How much Power Do We have left?" He said "20.3 Percent in the main reactor and uhh... 13.9 Percent in the axillery batterys that adds up to 34.2 percent" he said silence fell over the bridge again then Docs piped up "Jet how many Parsecs does it take to get to here" "12 Parsecs" Jet Replied Then Docs put an ominus look on his face and said "Just enough to get us to Planet U" Then as if she read his thoughts Jet Ran up to the Control Tower. Then the ship jolted forward at 5566 SMPH! yes Jet had put the ships engines into Full Throttle and a few minutes later we had Visual Contact with Planet U and in its Gravitational Pull then Jet Realesed the throttles and... the ship kept going? somthing was wrong The Throttles on an RRUS Class ship had snap-back releases but these were Broken... To Be Continued (1-a) and (1-b) Vissortria is the Visser home world and Akcor is from said planet. (2) amurosse is the planet for the ZMC or Zotaxian mining colony they mine Energy hex's there. (3) Kankeves (Pronounced Can-Cevs) is an artificial planet that used to be in the Coreillian sector it was moved by the intergalactic warlords the Rotokhs (Pronounced Roh-Tocks) Chapter 2 (Intro) well we reached Planet U but somthing was terrably wrong the snap-back releases on the thrusters had been damaged in the wormhole so we were now plumiting down to Planet U Axle Prologue The RRUS DS Crashed onto The surface of Planet U it was a smoldering wreckage fortunetly no was was Killed or injured (apart from the ocassional open wound and broken bones ) Dave climbed out of a piece of the hull or was it piece of the reactor or the main frame computer? no-one had the slightest idea because the entire ship was a twisted mess what a mess this is i wonder if we can repare it before school starts in september he thought (end of Prologue) "Oh no we have to repaire the RRUS Explorer before september" Said Docs "hold on a sec RRUS Explorer? i thought it was named after me!" said a confused Dave "it was its unofficial name kid it was named that just after it was built we named it after you on your birthday" Said Axle "oh alright then lets get down there" Said Dave "I give the commands around here kid" Said Docs "oh sorry heh heh" they broke through the surface and.. there was a sort of musty smell "*sniff sniff* Ugh some one has to air this out" said Sparks The Caves Looked Sort of Different Since The Last time they were Here But they hadn't Changed a bit and it was Proved By the map logs Jet kept when they were there last "Good thing i kept these. Didn't think we'd be comin' here this soon though" She said They found an old Base Well whats left of one any way and started Repeiring it "These No good Modern Tools They're not compatible with the stuff we used before" Complained Bandit "No wait Look!" Axle Pulled out a small box hidden underneath somthing that looked like a Power Pack that they are going to use instead of a Power station "Ah the old Tools" Gushed Bandit "Oh Bandit Ahha hahaha" Chuckled Xavier After 17 hours the nessesiary Parts of the base Were complete: The Barracks, the canteen, The Air Pumps, The Hydronex (which is a Water Prossessing Plant Which Takes Hydrogen and Oxygen Molecules From the Air so the Air Pumps are Crusial to the Use of the hydronex) and a food Prosesser (not the kind you make smoothies with They clone the Food from scraps, Crumbs and Any other thing you might find on a plate after Meals) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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