STUDZ Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 Well, here I was in BORING french class, and my teacher gives us an assignment. The main point is to be able to use Future Tense in some advertisement... IN FRENCH. At first, I was thinking about doing a commercial for "Redneck Tech" but then a friend of mine (Known here as TravisTouchdown) gave me an idea: Make an Aperture Science Investment Opportunity video. So, TravisTouchdown was in charge of getting the camera, lemons, translating, and being the "scientist" in the video, and I put all the clips together with Windows Movie Maker, as well as writing the English script. Oh, and I also did the Cave Johnson voice. I did a French version and an English version (posting the English version on YouTube). I put my heart and soul into this video, and apparently, "Heart and soul" = 77% for my mark on the French project. Oh, well... I'll let you guys be the judge. Here's the English version. Tell me what you think of it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addictgamer Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 I found this pretty entertaining. A finishing touch would have been having some music. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McJobless Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 Your Visual Effect department could use some work. I could tell it was fake...only just, but still... BUT SERIOUSLY, it's alright. I agree with addict on the music; using something from one of those old 50's commercials would have enhanced the comical value of this video. And if you ever need explosives, just ask me. I can rig you up with some awesome bang. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leumeister Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 at around 0:38 this caption should be: Nice job breaking it hero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenyx Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 A bit of fitting background music would be good (rhythm line for still alive, anyone?), and a vignette always helps in the style category. Your transitions could use a little touching up, too. I'm probably asking a bit too much though - I'm used to videos like Concrete Hustle and Theft of the Viridian Crystal. Still, other than that it's quite well made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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