Seamonster Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 (edited) Rain falls from the sky, as the Zotgonuan(*1) castle begins the great sacrifice day(*2). In the great hall the Zotgonuan king and his advisors begin the "devouring", they walked to their diner tables, and at each table laid one Zotaxian for all six species hive, ready to be eaten by the Zotgonuans. in the mean time at the hive of the Zotlorians(*3), their queen, Maroonya, told her peapol that the Zotgonuans, order of sacrificing three of each six hives, where beginning to threat their very existence. She told her kind that she and the six other hive leaders would hold a meeting about this threat tomorrow. The next day, at the great hive mind(*4) all six leaders of the six Zotaxian hives. But before the meeting could begin, they where attacked by the Zotgonuans, They where arrested for high treason against the Zotgonuan king and where sentenced to death. The Zotgonuan king, Croutrofh then told live to the rest of the six hives that their leaders was arrested for treason, and that a new leader to each of the hives would be chosen, unknown to all the other hives, was that their new leaders where going to be all Zotgonuan. Croutrofh where hoping that it would hold all the hives under control until they had eaten them, all. Maroonya's daughter, Ranyasa, was worried sic about her mother, frightened that she was killed by the Zotgonuan. But the Zotlorians high general, Morukyxo, was telling her to not cry and be strong, and that her mother where alright. In the mean time in one of the Zotgonuan castle's dungeons, all of the six Zotaxian hive leaders where held prisoners, then Croutrofh came in, and told Maroonya that her daughter would b the next offering at the next sacrifice day. What Croutrofh didn't know, was that Ranyasa and the other princes and princesses of the Zotaxian hives, where sneaking in to the Zotgonuan castle to save their parents. While they where doing that, a group of Zotarnomans(*5) was digging their usual caves, but then they stopped when they saw a rock wall with markings on it, and they quickly run away, but diden't make it as only one survivor was found, and told that the rest was eaten by the great demon worm(*6) To be continued... (*1) The Zotgonuans are a carnivore species of the Zotaxians, they are a three headed insect/snake/Alien hybrids, that became the prime dominant species of Zotax, and where feared by all the other six species. their way of eating is by using their mouth-tongue as a straw and drink the body fluid of their victim completely dry. (*2) The great sacrifice day, is a day the Zotgonuans made to better fit their carnivore nature and to hold the other hives in place by making them fear them. each hive would send three members of their kind to the Zotgonuans to be eaten by them. (*3) Zotlorians are a Nectarivore species of the Zotaxians, they are an butterfly/ant hybrids that is considered to be the second dominant species of Zotax. They are more friendly and peaceful than other species, and wont be the ones to start a fight nor a war, but when their only option is to fight or die, they will fight for their freedom and peace. they and the Zotgonuans are considered natural enemies. (*4) the great hive mind is a place on Zotax where all decisions are made, its here where all of the seven hive leaders meet, to agree or disagree. Its name comes from the great hive mind. an entity thats origins have been lost in time. it is considered an important member of the Zotaxians species and is looked up too. (*5) Zotarnomans are an ant like species of the Zotaxians. They are always at work, and are the working horses of the Zotaxian species. They have constructed many of the hives to the other species. (*6) the great demon worm is a giant sand worm like creature witch is belived to be as old as Zotax itself. This worm lives in the forbidden desert valley. it so big, that it can go over half of the planet. There are some stories that it can breath fire, but those are questioned. Edited April 14, 2012 by Seamonster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Seamonster Posted March 17, 2012 Author Share Posted March 17, 2012 thank you! What do you think of the story so far? i am going to continue on it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seamonster Posted March 17, 2012 Author Share Posted March 17, 2012 thank you! What do you think of the story so far? i am going to continue on it later. arg, how did i make two of the same comment? sorry, i only meant to make one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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