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Chapter 1 -- We Have Liftoff!

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Chapter 2 -- Fingers to Plug Your Ears With

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Chapter 3 -- I Want to Believe

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Chapter 4 -- Pick Up Sticks

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Chapter 5 -- A Swing and a Miss

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Chapter 6 - In Which Bob and Rob Are Crap at Hockey
COMING SOON

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Fun stuff! Feels sort of like taking a stroll through early Bionicle - a comedic stroll. Interested to see where things are going - definitely gonna be keeping that poem in mind as I read the coming chapters.

  On 6/13/2016 at 12:17 AM, Pranciblad said:

No, it’s not an “alternate universe” because the usage of that term in relation to Bionicle makes me gag.

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a good opinion :glasses:

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  On 6/13/2016 at 2:09 AM, Pereki said:

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No, it’s not an “alternate universe” because the usage of that term in relation to Bionicle makes me gag.

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a good opinion :glasses:

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One has to wonder what Greg Farshtey was thinking as he wrote those...

 

... or smoking...

 

 

An... amusing short story... but I think cheese should be either not applied at all, applied in moments to break tension, or just spammed so that the pizza has nothing else on it, not even a base. You seem to be in an unfortunate middle...

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I hate to sound indignant here, but I don't quite understand where your criticism is coming from. From what I can glean from the rather muddled analogy you made, stories can lack humour, use humour sparingly, or be largely humourous; and I'm not sure exactly how this story doesn't fall into that last category, unless you're expecting me to write a gag in every line or something.
 

  On 6/13/2016 at 9:08 AM, aidenpons said:

One has to wonder what Greg Farshtey was thinking as he wrote those...

 

... or smoking...

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dude harakeke lmao

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Oh hey I missed that chapter 4 was added. I have no idea what is going on! 

 

considering we already have a frog dude and a giant maggot, minifigs being in this universe doesn't feel that out of place. I look forward to robot hockey

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Oh, we'll learn what those two are pretty soon. They're not as out-of-place as you'd think. I'm just being vague because Bob and Rob have no reason to know themselves yet. And also, while there's some very significant foreshadowing in this chapter, there's also a bit of a red herring. I'll leave you to figure out which is which.

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Rob and Bobs revelling in their newly articulate Sports bodies is pretty great. I knew that dude wasn't an amphibib, but I missed out on him being a Martian - I guess they do look pretty frog like!

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  • 7 months later...

aw yeah its back! seems like a transitory chapter to get back into the meat of things on Mata Nui, but still fun. I appreciate the nod to takua's goofy kolhii/makuta killing move. Curious to see what's gonna happen with Chekov's kraata, too. 

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