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1. Shorter. Great for me since I'm busy and don't generally have time to read an entire novel in one sitting, much to the opposite of my preferences. 2. 4 - Good, but could use some improvement. I like it, but it seems weird having all these random events thrown in and making sense to everybody. Like in the lighting thief. That's the only thing that bugged me about that book and chapter one of your story. I don't think you should worry about it. It's just a pet peeve of mine. Hmm...I guess I can give you a five in that case...Ya. Why not. 5. You get a 5. 3. See 2.

Haha that sucks

trololololo Now what you gotta do is go ask your friend where he/she got his/her information from.

I'll go get the punt gun...

hello, dolan must be shot.