Lair Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Tell people to stop posting lots of comments together Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonic322 Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 you are the only person doing that Lair Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lair Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 No I am not, I am the onlyone not doing it, see page 15 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonic322 Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 yes I know I was talking about right now, at this very moment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aki Dazrold Posted October 20, 2009 Author Share Posted October 20, 2009 You turn on the lighter. You can barely ditinguish the hall's features. You can make out two separate halls starting on either side about four meters in front of you. Straight ahead, you can see a second story that overlooks this hall about twenty meters in front of you. The hall you are standing in continues underneath. You can see metal fixtures jutting out of the wall in a couple places... You think they look like floodlights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEPICtrainrider Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Ask Derick if he can get to the floodlights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aki Dazrold Posted October 20, 2009 Author Share Posted October 20, 2009 "I guess so." He walks in, and jumps on the wall to get a closer look at one of them. He puts his face right next to it, examining it closely. "Well, what do you know... it IS a floodlight." Robert Walks in. "Now, why would there be floodlights in her-" he starts, just to get interrupted by someone shouting, "NOW!!". Suddenly, all the floodlights turn on at the same time, blinding all three of you (and consider where Derek's face was a second ago. Yeah...). Derek screams in pain and falls off the wall. You feel several small pricks in your skin. Your vision clears a bit, and you see a bunch of darts sticking out of you in random places. You can see Derek thrashing about on the floor, and Robert has readied his sword. From various places in the hall, you see other people with guns advancing on your position; some of them have net launchers. Your vision starts to go black, and the last thing you see before you pass out is a net flying at your face. END OF PART ONE. PART TWO: (POV shift) You slowly wake up in a room surrounded by concrete. You feel awful. Your whole body is sore; you think it's from being on the hard floor, but you ache everywhere for some reason. Your head aches more than the rest of your body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sonic322 Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 examine the room Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aki Dazrold Posted October 20, 2009 Author Share Posted October 20, 2009 The room is kinda square-ish, there is an open door to your right and a hallway on your left. There are a few burn marks and metal shrapnel scattered about the room in a few places. The wall behind you has a large crater in it, the side before you has some screws in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Storm Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Go out the door Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aki Dazrold Posted October 20, 2009 Author Share Posted October 20, 2009 You stand up and go out the door. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheDoctor Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 You stand up and go out the door. Look around very cautiously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aki Dazrold Posted October 20, 2009 Author Share Posted October 20, 2009 You look around. There is a staircase to the left. There is a breeze flowing through the room. You shiver. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
INB681 Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Ask yourself: Who am I? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aki Dazrold Posted October 20, 2009 Author Share Posted October 20, 2009 You ask yourself, who am I? You can't seem to remember much of anything. But you are able to come up with a name... Your name is Mariam. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEPICtrainrider Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 go up the stairs.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aki Dazrold Posted October 20, 2009 Author Share Posted October 20, 2009 You walk up the stairs. As you go up, you find the source of the breeze: a giant fan in the ceiling. You shiver some more, and put your arms around yourself. It's little wonder you're cold; you aren't wearing much. At the top of the stairs, you find a rectangular fence box that surrounds the fan. You see a door frame across the room. There is some kind of bloody mess splattered against part of one of the walls. [figured it out yet?] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEPICtrainrider Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Go through the door way that sounds oddly familiar.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zjean Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Crazy Revivy Girl? Would explain why her number had a M before it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aki Dazrold Posted October 20, 2009 Author Share Posted October 20, 2009 You go through the doorway. There is a hall that it goes into. Directly across is another open door. To the right is a doorway that looks damaged. There are boards covering the way in. To the left is yet another open door that has a stairwell that leads downward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheEPICtrainrider Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 go down the stairs... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aki Dazrold Posted October 20, 2009 Author Share Posted October 20, 2009 [thru the left door?] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dabomb29 Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Yes, through the left door. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zjean Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Or you could ignore me. That works to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dabomb29 Posted October 20, 2009 Share Posted October 20, 2009 Or you could ignore me. That works to. Don't make posts about that stuff here that has nothing to do with the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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